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Last week on the 30th July our class had to re-write a sentence from the worksheet we got. We had to write down some descriptive words in the columns and in the end choose some to make an extended sentence.
Here is my senses poster:
Next time I think I could improve on writing everything tidier/not as messy.
I could use this as an example when I am writing other descriptive pieces, like when I need to be reminded of the columns and words.
Have you ever rewrote a sentence?
Kia Ora, Frances.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy your blog post and how you wrote it. I also enjoy your reading task you have done, you have some very creative and descriptive words.
Next time, I suggest you take a clearer photo of your masterpiece work, cause I can't see it that well.
I really like your sentence you did, great job!
hi Frances I really like your post it's really good but next time I try to add more to your reflection but it's still good
ReplyDeleteHi Frances
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blog post and I like the adjectives you used to describe the door. Maybe next time you could add what you enjoyed doing. Another thing I liked about your senses poster was how you drew the door as well. I have done done this before. Great jobe Frances! 👍